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Playing With Words Under Fire

Playing with words under fire Is like making a jar out of clay Amorphous, grotesque, misshapen and odd But the potter's keen hands know the way. So as the words spin on his wheel He takes the lump in his clutch, And softens it slowly by feel With a firm and yet delicate touch. Then those formed words under fire Sculpted new into perfect design Molded to the potter's desire Are then given a glaze and a shine.
9.11.18 Contest: Playing with words under fire

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Date: 10/6/2018 1:10:00 PM
What a lovely take on the challenge, Jesse. Superbly penned. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 10/6/2018 4:01:00 AM
Awesome Jesse, Your descriptive poetry word leaves an imprint on ones mind, Well Done. Kind regards, Jennifer
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Date: 10/5/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/5/2018 3:19:00 PM
Jesse, the metaphors in this brilliant piece are deserving of First Place. Congratulations on your wonderful win!: )
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Date: 10/5/2018 1:44:00 PM
"sculpted new into perfect design" grabbed me by the poet's lapel and said look at this. "molded to the potter's desire" is exactly right too. I did not know what I was looking for until your poet's heart gave me a smile and a shine with this well-penned poem.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 10/6/2018 7:10:00 AM
Thank you so much. This was a fun contest and an interesting writing prompt.
Date: 10/5/2018 8:24:00 AM
You've certainly formed some choice porcelain on this site, Jesse. This was wonderful! Wendy
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Date: 10/5/2018 8:16:00 AM
Greg wrote a funny one and yours is much more serious and refined! Congrats, Jesse!!
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Date: 10/5/2018 7:54:00 AM
Gorgeous piece Jesse! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:51:00 AM
I love this; you've given me a new, "Fav", Jesse.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/11/2018 3:56:00 PM
wow, GREAT job molding that poem with your own words as inspired by the contest theme! And thanks what you said about away. I had not noticed it was a reversible poem also!!
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/11/2018 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. And you're welcome.

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