Peace Out

Perceptions, vibes, aura, energy It’s all affecting me Messing up my emotions and creating Commotion within me What I thought I once knew has been interrupted By vocal opinions Stop messing with my decisions I thought I had it all together I thought I knew what I wanted It’s all discombobulated now Sometimes I think I’ve been taunted By the second-hand smoke that's dispersing in the atmosphere Should I inhale or hold my breathe in fear Fear of losing familiarity in the midst of this cloud Now I’ve received clarity To walk away piece by piece So I throw up my deuces Stand up I’m out PEACE!

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Dianna Collier

Date: 11/30/2023 7:33:00 PM

Congrats on your new book. I will order next time I order stuff so I get free shipping. I also had my book published this week (Thoughts of the Confused and Broken Hearted). Have you posted any of the poems from your book on the site? Just wanted to say thanks as your class was helpful in writing my book.

Shy Brown
Date: 3/2/2024 3:55:00 AM

Hi Dianna, good to hear from you! I apologize for not seeing your message until now. Thanks for ordering a copy of my book, and congratulations to you for publishing your book. I will be sure to get a copy. I'm happy the class was helpful to you! Stay in touch!