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Written on May 8, 2024

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Stars, twinkling like fireflies, senses, Even my heart’s best defenses Can’t prevent the feelings flowing, One heartbeat away, rhythms growing… Moonlight, whispers pearlescent charm, Professing gentle who shan’t harm. Wonder that is always glowing, One heartbeat away, rhythms growing… Celestial nights, sleepless delights Soundless psalms carrying insights. Words can’t tell the love we’re showing, One heartbeat away, rhythms growing… Skies trembling with the song of life, Hope unspeakable ends all strife. Dazzling twilights are mind-blowing, One heartbeat away, rhythms growing… Yes! My spirit seeks amazing, Beyond the clouds, ever praising… God is honestly all-knowing! One heartbeat away, rhythms growing…

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Date: 5/8/2024 12:55:00 PM
I like how your poem is a captivating celebration of the beauty and wonder of the cosmos, inviting readers to contemplate the mysteries of existence and find solace in the eternal rhythms of the universe..
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Date: 5/8/2024 10:58:00 AM
very pretty and very insightful <3 an enjoyable read and the picture puts you in the world of the poem. Much Blessings ~ Hiba.
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Date: 5/8/2024 6:08:00 AM
a beautifully constructed Kyrielle. I love this form but have only written one poem with that format. Yours is exquisite in imagery and rhyme...smooth and gracious words and messages, dear Gina. I especially liked the last line! Well said. Have a pleasant day, hugs & blessings, Sara
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