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Of Emptiness

Full of failure. I always feel afraid that I'm not sufficient so those I love are left behind me. The mistakes of my past are what shape my present. My hope and trust are hurt beyond healing There is NO redeeming me. And what I believe is that the hope of tomorrow is fleeting, and all I know is Emptiness This is a reversible poem that can be read backwards (line by line) as well as forward. In this case. The backwards reading has an opposite meaning.

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Date: 10/1/2018 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win. I just love how you used this reversible form. Shifting the suffering mind to its opposite. Brilliant :)
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Date: 9/25/2018 5:50:00 PM
A fun form, Jesse. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Date: 9/24/2018 1:59:00 PM
Loved the depth and creativity of this terrific poem, Jesse!:-) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/24/2018 11:40:00 AM
Such an amazing reversible poem, that also presents two opposite meanings, Jesse! Extremely difficult to do. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners! Sandra
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Date: 9/9/2018 9:14:00 PM
An amazing introspection, Jesse.. I love the opposing viewpoints your ingeniously written poem conveys depending on how you read it.. Either way, it's an awesome piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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