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None To Blame

A traced path you walk on the hands of God lend in motion a Light you cross the heart of Nature overflowed... at a loss! overlapped are your worlds ever entranced are your words. The call, not whispered, neither spelled just an urge... a push out of nowhere to an open wide gate of fate. Nameless is your state dismantled are the pieces inside your heart loses its mind your mind evades its head your soul hypnotized! Many a hole roaming your very whole nothing under control everything tempting to the bone. None to blame! How to flee the strain? What can a soul serve to silence the whinge? What can a mind consider to contain a pain? What can a heart attain to remain sane? None to blame! The gleam of Faith blesses you awake to a truth, one only truth you wane trying to conceive what you cannot perceive. Surrender and seize the spark radiate serene bliss held together and blessed is your soul.

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2018 7:43:00 AM

I am inspired by your musing and self questioning, Besma. There are so many things to which we never get answers, but let that not deter us from enjoying life. All we need is faith in ourselves and our creator. I do not want to be a traveler searching for the unattainable...I will let my heart and soul lead the way, instead:) ~ Warm regards & blessings my friend. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/31/2018 3:23:00 PM

What a unique, beautiful and insightful feedback! A wise soul would ever take the lead.. your presence and feedback do honour my humble work.. thank you so much Paul for your generosity and support. My deepest regards. Happy New Year and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/24/2018 1:54:00 AM

Wow Besma, I think this is my favourite poem, you have absolutely excelled in your poetic aspirations and have conquered all paths that lead to wisdom, faith, spirit, truth soul and love. and have penned this work of art to perfection! well done, Hugs jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/24/2018 2:33:00 PM

Such beautiful, profound and appreciative feedback is the best of rewards which elevates my poetic soul and lets my humble poetry aspires to the highest of beauty that meets the grandeur of a passionate reader and a dearest poetess.. thank you so much dear Jennifer for giving me this great bliss and honour.. love and hugs. Be blessed always.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/23/2018 2:24:00 PM

My dear friend, I so truly love the great depth , beauty and message sent in your fantastic poetry! It is an honor to read and fav this exquisite gem representing truth, light and love..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/25/2018 10:27:00 AM

Reading your generous, kind and appreciative words I do feel honoured and humbled! Your gracious presence and lovely feedback I do highly value. Thank you so much Robert for your constant support and encouragement. A soul of grandeur and humility you are, blessed be always. My deepest regards.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2018 2:16:00 PM

Oh, I love this ending; beautifully penned, Besma. Your soul reaches into those depths of the human spirit and pulls out the most profound wisdom. The light continues to glow...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/23/2018 3:05:00 AM

I do appreciate the beauty of your praise M.L. Kiser.. a feedback that elevates the soul and let ink flow wonders that reach the readers hearts.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards. Blessed be.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/18/2018 10:16:00 PM

Words wisely said, dear sister...your verse speaks volumes...be everlastingly blessed my friend, Besma...love & eternal light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2018 10:08:00 AM

Your presence brings delight and your feedback speaks praise and beauty! Thank you so much for your kind words Winged Warrior.. my honour and pleasure.. Stay in the light of Beauty.. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2018 11:05:00 AM

You bring forth so splendidly the turbulence felt in life..the mind, soul, heart working in unison to reach the truth...and bliss. Energy and intensity of your write touch the reader's heart..well done, Besma. Regards, as always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2018 10:04:00 AM

Reaching my reader's heart is my utmost joy! An honour I always look up to.. writing words of value that touch the heart, shake the mind and bring Love and Life to the soul.. thank you so much dear Vijay for your generous and rewarding feedback.. My deepest regards. Be always blessed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/18/2018 10:11:00 AM

A very thought provoking verse Besma, so well written. If we strive to follow only the true path then many questions and mysteries will become clearer to us. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2018 9:55:00 AM

That's the essence of our journey of Life.. to attain Truth, contentment and inner peace.. always a delight to read your encouraging feedbacks Tom. You honour my humble write. Best regards. Stay blessed always.