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Sitting by her open window Was a girl deep in thought, Lost within a book of Poe A perfect poem she sought With a curious eye He watches her pen, For she gives it a try Every now and then He will visit her forevermore In silent hours of midnight, Casting his shadow on her floor Within the full moonlight Mysterious, nocturnal bird Calling out to darkened land, Speaking such wise word Which I cannot understand I am lonely, I must confess It's just you, me and the moon, You are much like me, I guess So, please sing me another tune A messenger of death Wailing songs of a banshee, Has my grim reaper cometh Was this warning meant for me? My soul was projected In the shadow of a fowl, A raven I had expected Not the silhouette of an owl!

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Date: 1/20/2021 4:58:00 PM
Charming poem ~ So glad to see it published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/14/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comments on it, Line :)
Date: 12/2/2020 6:06:00 PM
Kelly, I enjoyed reading this poem in the anthology, congrats on having it included. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/9/2023 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comments on it, John :)
Date: 5/24/2017 11:30:00 PM
Love it, and your trophy win :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/27/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I'm glad you liked it... This older poem is still one of my favorites that I've written so far, and I also think it is still one of the better ones that I've written, too.
Date: 8/26/2016 9:54:00 AM
Kelly, congratulations on your Trophy First Place win for this beautiful, deep, well-written poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/10/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Your kind congrats and comments are much appreciated :)
Date: 8/19/2016 9:29:00 AM
Congrats on your trophy win,...wonderful write. :) Sunita
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/8/2016 6:24:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments. I appreciate them very much, Sunita :)
Date: 8/19/2016 8:33:00 AM
Huge congrats Kelly. I remember this one. So rich with emotion.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/7/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tim. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem once again :)
Date: 8/19/2016 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on the #one win!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/7/2016 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ronald!
Date: 8/19/2016 4:51:00 AM
Great poem, Kelly:) Congratulations on top spot:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/1/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your kind congrats and comments :)
Date: 8/18/2016 7:45:00 PM
Owls are cool: They deliver mail at Hogwarts; they spin their heads like a demon; they can see in the dark and are excellent hunters -- but, they cannot speak at all like a raven! Great poem, Kelly! ;-)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/1/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Your kind comments are much appreciated... Yes, owls are very cool. They are probably my favorite animal and I've written several poems about them :)
Date: 8/18/2016 4:23:00 PM
Super congratulations on your awesome win... Linda
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/30/2016 10:03:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Linda :)
Date: 8/18/2016 4:17:00 PM
Kelly, Congrats on your awesome #1 win. It's an honor to have you join my contest. Enjoy my newest blog, "AFTER YOU." Love, Luv SKAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. It really is an honor for me to place in one of your contests... I haven't been around much lately. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile. But, now I'm ready to get back to posting poems and entering contests again.
Date: 8/18/2016 4:15:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Kelly great rhyme and I like the twist at the end:-) hugs jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/20/2016 9:19:00 PM
I'm glad you liked this, Jan. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind congrats... Hugs :)
Date: 12/3/2015 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/4/2016 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda :)
Date: 12/3/2015 4:13:00 AM
Brilliant write Kelly .. congrats on fine win!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/29/2015 10:53:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments on this poem, Dr. Upma :)
Date: 12/2/2015 11:43:00 PM
Kelly, WOW, can't believe you did not score high with this one. , Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/29/2015 10:51:00 PM
SKAT, thank you for your supportive comments on this poem. I really appreciate them... I was hoping my poem would have scored higher as well. :)
Date: 5/26/2015 5:55:00 PM
Kelly, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/12/2015 7:24:00 AM
Wow this poem is absolutely beautiful I love it!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/14/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Avery!
Date: 5/10/2015 2:47:00 PM
Revisiting this one, your SECOND best poem at soup. Keep coming up with ones like this!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/13/2015 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. This is one of my favorite poems. I recently began collaborating with Liam McDaid and he has brought back that darker edge to my writing. I missed it and will be doing more poems like this one :)
Date: 6/17/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest! I enjoyed reading this with all it's imagery. Congratulations on the win. It touched me in it's content.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/19/2014 5:29:00 PM
You're welcome, Carol, and thank you for hosting this contest that featured our favorite poems. I'm happy that you enjoyed mine!
Date: 6/16/2014 5:35:00 AM
Well penned Kelly ! by the way Owl is my fav bird , i can wink as an owl does,,, has always fascinated me,, so does your poem ,, congrats on ur win !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/19/2014 12:14:00 AM
Thank you for the kind congrats and nice comments, Dr. Upma.... Owls are one of my favorite animals, too. I am thinking about hosting a contest with an owl theme, sometime in the future.
Date: 6/15/2014 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your favorite poem. Love,Joyce
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/17/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Joyce!
Date: 6/15/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/15/2014 8:31:00 PM
Thank you for reading my favorite poem, Dr. Ram. I appreciate your nice comments.
Date: 6/15/2014 12:09:00 AM
Awesome poem Kelly.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/14/2014 10:54:00 PM
Hi Kelly. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 6/1/2014 10:46:00 PM
Love this one my friend!! I love owls and Poe too. BBBBBBravo!!!!!!! Into my fav it goes!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/3/2014 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! It's always nice to know that there are poets out there who are fans of Poe! I really do appreciate the fav, Robert! :)
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