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Negative Tier

Aroused by denial, Disturbing thoughts prevail, Wishing reprisal, Hostility unveiled. Sharpened words uncover The mask in place. Extreme emotions hover, Seen in your face. Venom grows inside, Feeding the fire, Where poison resides, In the skeptic’s lair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/9/2023 2:47:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/11/2022 11:13:00 PM
Such destructive energies, that many of us Know of ' & have been effected by: best to Turn away from their soulless pull Seek Jesus, not the manufactured one ' But your own personal redeemer ' All blessings.'
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Date: 8/14/2022 4:12:00 AM
Very well penned, enjoyed the read ~ written in 2006, I perceive
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Date: 2/12/2022 9:06:00 AM
Well written!
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Date: 5/15/2021 11:20:00 AM
Powerful images you have created with these stanzas...I had to read twice. Congrats on your selection here.
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Date: 11/28/2020 9:52:00 PM
excellent the last stanza; beautifully composed; I enjoyed
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:10:00 PM
janet Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Janet. Love, Carol
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