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My Friend Pine Tree

My Friend Pine Tree Away, quite away from my nearby Allen Forest One day I was moving on a hill top On a Himalayan mountain hill I found myself standing Before a beautiful and majestic Pine tree The tree was tall and beautiful The wind was blowing, its sprigs and leaves As if, a flute blower was playing with its flute The Pine tree was swinging and singing Creating a melody of its own I too got lost to watch and hear that music And felt as if, the tree wanted to speak with me I gently touched the tree and felt its thrills A sensation ran through my spine and body I found that the Pine tree was singing in joy The breeze was full of drizzling and the hanging clouds Were touching and embracing the hill top tree While the sky was flashing a brilliant light And I was charmed by that magical yellow light Coming from a slice of the clouds, hovering on another hill And showering on the Pine tree and on every thing all around Every things including me was taking a bath In the rains of that magical defusing light sublime I again felt a sweet sensation running my spine When a sprig of Pine tree touched my fingers As if, it was trying to shake my hand with pleasure To show how happy was the Pine tree To find a friend in such a weather sublime Overwhelm by the sensations of pleasure I felt While standing before the Pine tree and beholding To dance and sing with the tree in those moments To celebrate the treasure of joy, it had given to me And remained in an state of ecstasy till I saw What humans have done with other Pine trees Which I saw on the other side of the hill The trees here were brutally cut and slain To get the resin from the trunks of every pine tree I saw them crying and weeping with agonies And their was no music and joy in their thrilling Although the wind was touching them here also But I could not behold my friend Pine tree In that state of agony any more. Ravindra Kanpur. India 01st December 2009

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Date: 4/14/2014 5:47:00 PM
a few people saw your poem at my blog and really enjoyed it, Ravindra. It truly is an awesomie poem about how you painted that picture.
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:37:00 AM
Thanks I will check your blog soon, as my area is having a network problem since yesterday morning. With best wishes for your Blog and You my friend. Ravindra
Date: 12/23/2013 9:41:00 PM
wow, an intense ending to this one. I think it's true that trees almost have spirits that feel pain!! Very nice one of yours I found way back in the oldies. And congrats for it having been featured in 2012..
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Ravindra. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2012 3:39:00 PM
Congrats Ravindra on "My Friend Pine Tree" being featured this week.
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Date: 12/23/2009 5:23:00 PM
yes I understand this ..from both sides now.Sad but true.
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:42:00 AM
I love pine trees too, and your love of nature shines in this poem. Very moving ~Juliane
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Date: 12/6/2009 1:42:00 AM
How wonderful that you can find such joy in nature, Ravindra. I really liked the way the touch of the pine tree's sprig seemed like the extension of a hand in friendship. It was very sad to read in your last verse that the "music and joy" had been erased as "The trees were brutally cut and slain." Some people call deforestation to make way for cities and homes progress, but I doubt Mother Nature feels that way. And I'm on her side. Great work! Love, carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2009 5:22:00 AM
Very nice flow here, Smooth and easy to read. Thanks for sharing. RdP
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:57:00 PM
Another great poem my friend! I love your intuitive insight and connection to the earth. I understand your heart.I listen to the wind and feel its wisdom and hear the music daily. Living in Alaska nature is all around me. I sure do feel for the pine tree here. Mother Earth she's in need of respect like never before. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/1/2009 9:53:00 PM
Interesting story, reflecting your closeness and sensitivity to nature and here particularly the pine tree. I think you are right, there is a sort music in nature when nature is happy. Thanks for sharing and again thank you for your nice comments on my poems as well. Caroline.
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:12:00 PM
Beautifully written about your love of nature. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Added this one to my favs. Sara
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:41:00 AM
The teenager who did this the song The Climb is also known as Hannah Montana on tv.She is the daughter of the country singer,Billy Ray Cyrus.Thanks for your comment.
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