Moved

As close as A porch swing hanging After rain.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/22/2024 12:58:00 PM

A FAV! Pangie Romios

Silent One

Date: 5/21/2024 10:57:00 PM

Brilliant...perfect haiku form

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2024 10:54:00 PM

Profundity in simplicity!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/14/2024 1:29:00 PM

Lovely Paige! There is a magic in rain that brings to life, many ideas for poetry. Good job Pangie Romios

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/13/2024 4:10:00 PM

what a delightful imagery you created with your Haiku. I love sitting in our porch swing while listening to and smelling the rain. Nicely done. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2024 3:01:00 PM

Pretty imagery :) Love it, Paige!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/13/2024 12:44:00 PM

A good vignette of a rainy day. Porch swings seem to have so many stories to tell. This a a smart haiku