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Mother In Memoriam

Our special bond forged even 'fore my birth, years together through misfortune and mirth. Since sadly snatched from the face of this Earth, each action and deed to confirm my worth. ------------- 14th April 2017 For the "Form M - Monorhyme" contest, sponsored by Butterfly Wings. (Fourth Place)

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:58:00 PM

Nicely written , John, congratulations on your win. ~*

Paul Callus

Date: 4/21/2017 5:21:00 AM

Back with congratulations, John! Well done and regards // paul

John Michaels
Date: 4/22/2017 4:04:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. Regards, John.

Constance La France

Date: 4/20/2017 2:43:00 PM

John congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme.

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:27:00 PM

Thank you for running the contest and for my placement! Regards, John.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2017 8:33:00 AM

Hi John, This pulled at the heart strings. Your heartfelt words "validated" the both of you. Well done. Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:22:00 PM

Hi Alexis. Thank you for the kind and supportive words... I'm touched that my little poem resonated with you. Regards, John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2017 8:33:00 PM

A mother's love is usually unconditional. I enjoyed this poem very much John. : ) 7

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:16:00 PM

Thank you for your valued comments, Connie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/17/2017 10:57:00 AM

Morning John. You did a marvelous job with the theme and execution of the format. Your words make this reader pause with your expression. Well done entirely. Good luck with the contest.

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:10:00 PM

Hi Lisa. Thank you so much for your kind words & continued support! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/16/2017 7:51:00 AM

Nothing stronger than a mothers love, well done John...

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:06:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments, Charlie. Regards, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/15/2017 7:45:00 AM

I enjoyed this short poem, John; the subject matter is one which never fails to inspire. gl in the contest. Regards // paul

John Michaels
Date: 4/20/2017 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. Kind words appreciated! Regards, John.

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2017 5:19:00 PM

A heartfelt write John...but the memories are a treasure..like Jan says we all dread that day when our mom is no longer with us...best wishes

John Michaels
Date: 4/15/2017 4:08:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph - yes, it's those memories that make us stronger... I just hope I continue to make her proud!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/14/2017 11:53:00 AM

aww John such a sad poem - I am blessed and still have my mother. I dread the day when she is no longer with us:-( hugs Jan xx

John Michaels
Date: 4/15/2017 4:06:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comments. It was some time ago, but is still painful sometimes. I hope your Mother is around for many years to come! All the best, John.