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Momentary Assurance

I was in a sound sleep ahem.. ahem... ahem.. ahem... Suddenly heard someone cough Then, i quickly opened my eyes to just find a heart lying on a thermal surface wriggling & weeping for support Oh...unfortunately it was Mine.. My Brain had a stroke watching at a strange sight instantly.. Strong choking feel in my neck.. Mouth remained unclosed for people to hear my voice box scream.. Hands and legs were in paralysed state Blood slowly kept dripping from my soul.. and tears leaking out of my glorious eyes Oops...there i stood .. freezing into a lifeless statue..! [struck by the storm of ephemeral stillness........] Gosh.. I urgently wanted Life..! Unexpectedly, there came my Hero stood by my side Gazed.. Gazed deeply into me Finally touched with his magical fingers And...wow i saw myself .. lying on the couch alive On his...broad shoulder..!
16-6-2021 ~DEEPA.V NOTE: ALL YOURS Poetry Contest Sponsored by BRIAN STRAND FIRST PLACE:-)

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Date: 6/25/2021 1:56:00 AM
Very nice tale. Beautifully narrated. Well written.
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Date: 6/20/2021 3:54:00 PM
Hello Deepa, oh my goodness, it has been a long ,long, long time. Welcome back. I missed you. God Bless. Your Friend. Grandma.
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Date: 6/15/2021 6:24:00 AM
Welcome back Deepa. Hope you are doing well. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Take care, God bless!
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