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Men Bleed a River Before They Cry

A knife stab on a man Hurts as much on a kid He has to remain mum A brave face to cede A woman on his side, on the other a son Two souls to shield, emotions never freed He has strength to lift a tonne And more to make his tears recede He holds the tears back like a dam When his boiling anger feeds His heartbreak may have no span But he won’t flip a lid Lucid is heartbreak to a woman It is heart dust to a man crushed to plead A moon ray in the absence of the sun Sparkles a tear drop on his eyelid When the world looks away he becomes human Allows his tears to flow and dilute his bleeding He knows crying a river killed no one But bleeding a river did

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Date: 2/12/2020 5:33:00 PM
I like this poem Michelo, the last two lines hit it right home, good write . . .
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Michelo Mweetwa
Date: 2/12/2020 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Indiana
Date: 2/6/2020 11:11:00 PM
I was raised with the the self-same expectation and twisted rule - "real" men don't cry ... I am thankful I learned the lie and escaped the emotional paralysis of that horrible misconception, (though in my marrow, I still feel guilty if I DO ... seems those early lessons never quite die). Great write, Michelo - going to my faves.
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Michelo Mweetwa
Date: 2/7/2020 12:10:00 AM
Thanks. Same cultural expectation here though I don't agree with it. It amounts to hidding ones true feeling in my view.

Book: Shattered Sighs