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Meditation Hour

meditation hour- sound of someone's broom clearing trash Kashinath Karmakar (kash poet) http://www.dailyhaiku.org/haiku/2014-december-15
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Date: 11/13/2016 9:16:00 AM
Came here to say hello again. HOpe to see more and more poetry though!
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Date: 9/25/2016 12:19:00 AM
I fully need two hours of clearing my trash. Love it. LINDA
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Date: 5/6/2016 8:01:00 PM
Oh, did I see this one on FB. It's SO wonderful, Kash. You know Susan Burch? She is very much into haiku too. She just won first place, like 150 dollars, in a big haiku contest!!
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Date: 4/26/2016 9:01:00 PM
Yes, I like this. Clever.
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Date: 4/26/2016 1:56:00 PM
great to see you back, kashi bud... chakras aligned; great use of symbolism... huggs
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:58:00 PM
You need another hour of meditation, kash, when the sweeping is done. I like Cas' comment. lol
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:50:00 PM
I like it, the removal of dirt and debris both physically and mentally. well said
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