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The fulgent grace of your soul dazzles. A tenuous foothold of a fragile love. How could you love me so ardently? Consider me treacherous and dreary. A fierce fire burns my soul. A life unquiet, never submissive. Your gentle placid nature shines. Quietly you ask: "Why do you love me?" I hedge, cough, lower my head, And retort: "How do you love me?" She is sage, subtle and shrewd. "As much as you allow me to." My heart will wear the heaviness for years. In lady like manner, she leaves, never looks back, tall and graceful, she walks down the main street like a grand dame, much to my regret. I deserve no better until I learn the meaning of true love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/6/2023 6:16:00 PM
only true love gives us all the answers nicely penned Victor, bless your heart
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Date: 1/6/2023 8:27:00 AM
Listen to your gut, don't fight it! Viva amore. ~Anaya
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Date: 1/5/2023 6:58:00 PM
We learn from our mistakes...very well written, Victor. Keep up the great writes, my friend!
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Date: 1/5/2023 6:13:00 PM
Victor I’m sure you know the meaning of love, you loved your wife as much as she loved you too. A well written nostalgic poem… Belle
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Date: 1/5/2023 5:06:00 PM
Victor! Hi! This vivid, imagist scene pulled me right in. I felt like a voyeur standing in a recessed doorway to see and overhear the scene between the two of you…. This had a mature, master’s tension in its build up that added dimension to a simplier take on a new affair. Much enjoyed! New Year hugs, sally
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Date: 1/5/2023 10:13:00 AM
Sweet, romantic write - the kind you do so well dear Victor. hugs :)
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Date: 1/4/2023 1:38:00 PM
A heartbreaking tale of love and farewell, Victor. However, as long as we take responsibility for our actions and grow from our experiences, we may make up for our missteps. On the other hand, I really enjoy the way you conveyed the story. A fave for me for its depth and touching diction.
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Date: 1/4/2023 10:08:00 AM
"to love and never love again", We sometimes don't realize how we are until to late. Great write my friend.
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:25:00 AM
A sad, parting story of love, Victor:)
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Date: 1/4/2023 5:14:00 AM
We all make mistakes in life but as long as we learn from them we can put things right. Tom
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Date: 1/3/2023 9:15:00 PM
Oh I love how you told that story. Much to be learned from it.
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Date: 1/3/2023 2:04:00 PM
She’s graceful, dazzling, and to the point.
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Date: 1/3/2023 1:26:00 PM
We keep learning that not doing can be as bad as what we fear from doing! Really touching expression of that, Victor! Elizabeth
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Date: 1/3/2023 10:42:00 AM
Victor, this is a beautiful telling of a haunting encounter. Too bad it ended in regret. Great writing, as usual. :)
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Date: 1/3/2023 7:49:00 AM
Hmmm ~ we live and learn
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Date: 1/3/2023 6:24:00 AM
Mr Romance strikes again. A divine beautiful poem Victor! Debx
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Date: 1/3/2023 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful verse of love, Victor. A meaningful message.
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Date: 1/3/2023 4:12:00 AM
You are the great bard of love, Victor. Each of your love poems excels the other !
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Date: 1/3/2023 3:27:00 AM
Let her see your beautiful poems Victor, and she will know what a treasure is in your incredibly passionate and gentle soul. This poem is another beautiful gem, honed to perfection.
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Date: 1/3/2023 2:39:00 AM
Wonderful to read something so beautiful Víctor, such beauty ín your words and such feeling ín the way you write.
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Date: 1/3/2023 1:29:00 AM
- Love should be easy to understand ... listen to the heart and soul ... a beautiful and sensitive poem, Victor :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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