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"One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life. The word is love.” ~ Sophocles, Greek Poet
Love, where travels thou diminishing shade? This is not the path I hastily bade nor is the future I envisioned made. Now, my Love, I feel thine true essence fade as old hung tapestry that's worn and frayed that in finality, to storage laid. Oh, Love. Art thou listening to my plea? I am selfish, I want thee near to me. Hear me now please oh Love. I beg of thee. Stay thou ground with me please and do not flee. Let us build a life together, may we? Or is our forbidden love not to be? Alas, thou hast died and our love is done and with shaking hands I cradle the gun.

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Date: 5/12/2024 3:16:00 PM
Linda, congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/13/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Constance. I appreciate the placement. Fun to write. :)
Date: 5/12/2024 9:13:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Love" sonnet write again. Enjoy your day with your wonderful win.............
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/13/2024 7:30:00 AM
Hi ya Paula! Thanks for the congrats! hugs and blessings :)
Date: 5/11/2024 4:19:00 PM
Whoa!! Some people do use murder and/or suicide as a way to handle a love not that did not work out, but that is not the right answer. Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/13/2024 7:30:00 AM
Romeo and Juliette crossed my mind as I wrote this Sara. Pretty drastic measures, as you say, not the right answer. Thank you! :)
Date: 5/2/2024 11:40:00 AM
Linda, this poem perfectly reflects the emotional despair of a soul feeling abandonment and betrayal. The last line shakes the soul of the reader into a reality of desperation at the crossroads of choice. Best wishes for the contest. Prayers for all of those who "cradle the gun." It is not the answer. Blessings.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/2/2024 4:52:00 PM
Amen sister. :)
Date: 4/29/2024 11:41:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful "Love" write. Love can come in many forms. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one... Have a fun day writing away.....................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2024 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I found yours so sweet and positive. GL! hugs :)
Date: 4/29/2024 6:48:00 AM
Dear Linda, What a raw and poignant exploration of love's complexities and its impact on our lives. I loved your words, for you delve into the depths of longing, regret, and despair. It's haunting the fragility of love and its weight, echoing Sophocles' timeless wisdom. Linda, it is a deeply moving reflection on the power and pain of love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thank you Daniel. I always appreciate your visits and comments. blessings :)
Date: 4/28/2024 8:20:00 PM
Love so often has its own spirit.... and decides who will know it and who will lose it. I like this piece , the yearning , the hope.... the reality. Nicely written ! Thank you for sharing yourself through your words. Darrell
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/29/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hi Darrell. You are welcome and thanks so much for visiting and commenting. :)

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