Lonesome

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When Pain's Too Deep For Tears......

'Children dreaming.... Down the hall Back to back.... We face the wall... Win some...Lose some...Lonesome Loving words.... Once filled this bed But tonight.... They go unsaid.... Win some...Lose some...Lonesome 'Guess we're not who we thought we were 'Guess some vows don't keep Alone in the dark...two worlds apart Only.... silence...speaks All roads lead to.... Come what may When there's nothing.... Left to say... But....Win some...Lose some...lonesome Protected by copyright Colab with R. Grimes & K. Ford

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/14/2019 6:37:00 PM

Your lyrical artistry sparkles in the rhythm and rhyme of faded love in this poignant piece, Chuck. ‘Win some... Lose some... Lonesome’... and may I add Awesome! Loved it. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 4/6/2019 11:05:00 AM

Vibrant message, I am in concordance.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/28/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Chuck

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/6/2019 2:52:00 PM

Thanks so much Charles! You are a great writer!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2019 8:40:00 AM

The best thing about your lonesomeness is the creation of this poem. A relatable sigh in the bittersweet beauty of your words Chuck. Wonderful! : ) xxoo

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/3/2019 12:10:00 PM

Connie, I'm so thankful for the heartbeat of your touching words!

Carole Duet

Date: 3/30/2019 12:00:00 AM

I can almost hear this one as a song. It's sad when love gets lost in the maze of life. Lyrics with potential I'd say. :D

Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/30/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Carole! If appreciation was a rose, you would have a rose garden!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/29/2019 11:39:00 AM

That is how life is..great lyrics Chuck on loss of love.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/30/2019 8:14:00 AM

My thanks to you VJ! Your kind words soar!