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Little Bee

I've been given a fancy name for my illness Clinically obese It may be contagious Never before seen in my colony I can't work or lift a finger Nice to see every one rally around me Even the queen bee is worried As what happened to me Even sent the worker bees All for one, hopefully one for all Giving me a hand I'm going to a special unit for unique bees.

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/28/2017 11:39:00 AM

Very unique poem, Tahira. My compliments!

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/29/2017 5:34:00 AM

Thank you for a lovely comment Ralph:)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/28/2017 7:42:00 AM

Wonderful verses read with much pleasure. Enjoyable, touching and clever work.Best regards.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/29/2017 5:34:00 AM

Thank you for such a lovely comment Ovidiu :-)

Suzanna Sladojevic

Date: 8/27/2017 9:31:00 PM

A funny poem and it fashionably suits our current time era wherein many people are being diagnosed with all sorts of illnesses.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/28/2017 2:51:00 PM

So true Suzanna, Yes, it make light fun on a serious situation. Thank you so much for commenting:)

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/27/2017 12:48:00 PM

Hello Tahira, Welcome to Poetry Soup!! I really enjoyed your verse write here on "Little Bee." And your attached pictures help to highlight your write here very much. I look forward to reading more of your poems over time, and please do feel free to read any of my poetry as well, as you may choose to do so. Once Again, Welcome!! And Best Wishes, Gary

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thank you for you lovely welcome. Very much appreciated. I will take time to look through your poems too Gary.:)

Dennis Foss

Date: 8/27/2017 11:07:00 AM

The sweet sting of awareness, even the worker bee's are there to comfort in hope.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Dennis for your lovely comment. I do appreciate that you took you time to comment on my page. Bees are so useful to the environment, busy making honey for so many medical benefits.:)

Nicholas Windle

Date: 8/27/2017 8:05:00 AM

what a delightful piece of work, and a very apt subject with the decline of the little souls. I like my fellow poets welcome you and hope to read more in the coming years. Thanks for sharing and may you find our little bunch supportive in your endeavours.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome. I do appreciate your comments and look forwards to reading your poems as well Nicolas:)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/27/2017 7:17:00 AM

Hi Tahira. Your work is really awesome, accompanying the video and picture!! Keep your work flowing! ;-)

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 3:59:00 PM

Thank you for you lovely comment Teddy :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2016 1:50:00 PM

you have a wonderful talent not only in your poems but in the cute pictures accompanying them:-) hugs Jan xx

Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/19/2016 4:02:00 AM

Thanks Jan, for a wonderful comment xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 12:52:00 PM

Tahira Parveen, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/7/2016 10:53:00 AM

Tahira,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for you lovely welcome Skat:)