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Kids In the Park-Collaboration

{Added to the end of the poem, of Charles Messina, as the last stanza} Before they head home They mark the ground with a stone Of where they left today To be continued once again 12 August 2018 Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:13:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Francesca..Congratulations on your win!
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/29/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Eve. Much appreciated :)
Date: 8/28/2018 8:25:00 AM
Francesca, I love the addition you've added to my poem. Although I would have liked to see it written in the entire poem it is definitely worthy of a placement in my contest. Thank you for entering and Congrats on your win. :) Charlie
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/28/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Duly noted. Much appreciated :)
Date: 8/13/2018 9:45:00 AM
Wonderful conclusion guys!!
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 8/13/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank very much Lyric man :)

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