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When silence speaks.... In the still hush of dawn serene Silence speaks of this pastoral scene Whispers of wind through fields of green Where nature’s beauty truly convenes Meadow flowers bloom in shades bright Beneath the soft morning’s sunlight Rustling leaves in gentle flight A tranquil moment, pure and right. The whip-poor-will ‘s song pon the air His melody is beyond compare A peaceful stillness everywhere In this gentle pastoral scene fair The babbling creek sings a sweet tune Beneath the silvery hidden moon Harmony felt beneath the fog so soon Now silence speaks as nature communes The nightjar’s voice slowly goes quiet Daybreak is here always reliant Early morn our only time to commune Thank you, God, for morn’s sweet tune

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Date: 5/8/2024 2:31:00 AM
Beautiful couplet rhymes. Dawn is always lovely when it's not cloudy like today.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/8/2024 4:29:00 AM
Sometimes there is some beauty in those clouds as well, Victor. This morning it is solid gray, but I don't know what the whole day will present. Yesterday it started off gray and ended up with some sun which was very hot and there was a lot of humidity. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K
Date: 5/7/2024 4:54:00 PM
Outstanding couplets, dear Deb! Your dawn imagery was captivating, and I enjoyed the fluidity of your words. I also love dawn so I sincerely took delight in your poem. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2024 5:18:00 PM
Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K
Date: 5/7/2024 4:34:00 PM
You’ve painted a beautiful picture, Sara. Sounds so blissful, an enjoyable read. Zyrool
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2024 5:18:00 PM
Why, thank you, Zyrool. Those country places can be quiet and peaceful. thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 5/7/2024 7:11:00 AM
Your description of the first noises and images of dawn is so vivid and beautiful, Sara. Your writing's style, rhythm, and the path it took me on were all quite enjoyable.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2024 7:28:00 AM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 5/7/2024 5:51:00 AM
Delightfully imagery you convey, Sara--bringing to fore the sights and sounds of dawn. Much enjoyed the tone and flow and the journey through your words.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2024 7:04:00 AM
Vijay, so glad that you found it delightful. Early morn before mankind rises..Sara K

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