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In the Dark Silence and Late

In the Dark Silence and Late At the enchanted hour when the night turns a ghostly gray, clouds slowly swirl in anger billowing a dense suffocating smoke choking the dim moon. All the insects and birds shy away. The beast crawls out from underneath the bed silently and late, ploys to take all bad little girls and boys. It is tall and walks with a limp, a shrimp like face, fire blazing eyes, vapor-stench mouth full of thorn sharp teeth. You can hear its cow hooves clatter as it walks across the room. He is covered with coarse dark brown hair, wears a spider spun flowing black shroud and holds a staff. In the dark silence and late, he will catch you by your ankles hold you upside down over a tethered sackcloth. A gift for himself as he passes by. You will fight and scream until you are blue to stay alive and beg not to take you. You will nosedive into he's dark gloomy den of doom to beat you at his feet. He will save you in a room until it is your turn for him to feast until his through. All children are afraid of monsters. Monsters that hide in the shadow, closet and underneath the bed. 10/25/2018

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Date: 10/27/2018 5:19:00 AM
You got me shaking in my boots Eve. A cow heh, I think it will make a welcome addition to the Halloween ghoulies out there, I enjoyed your poem this morning, Have a great day, be inspired and be happy, Love
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Date: 10/26/2018 7:57:00 AM
Eve, this was so cool, dark and scary and perfectly written. Wow, I have to say it again, wow. I really liked this a lot. Your created the creepiest picture with your words and had me lost within the story hoping it wasn't coming after me. Wow again!
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Date: 10/26/2018 3:08:00 AM
One memory I can remember is watching a film that had a mountain lion in it. I was convinced it was under my bed. Often think of it. Well written Eve. Tom
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:43:00 PM
Your descriptive imagery appealed to every bit of child in me, and since I have a child's heart, I put this straight through to my FAV list, Eve. Thank you!
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:33:00 PM
Your monster is very well created and described, and you've done really well to set imagery and mood of quite some menace. Great piece.
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