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If I Coulda Woulda Shoulda

Could you be the love I seek In this confusing life Does it always have to be Looking for a wife Could I make you happy With romance I supply Would you be forgiving If ever I should lie Could you fill my arms When ever you would cry Could you kiss my lips Before a long goodbye Could you ride with me If following a hearse Would you set me free Before my heart you’d burst Could I make you see A wedding day rehearsed Would you stay with me Even If I were cursed (Written for someone I know right now()

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Kelli White

Date: 9/27/2023 3:22:00 AM

I love this poem, kelli

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/24/2023 1:20:00 PM

So many things to ponder while in love's dance. I remember asking myself similar questions when I met my hubby Bill. After 40 years of marriage, love prevails. I don't think I knew soulmate love until we met...I felt overwhelmed. We've stayed together, even when our earthly relationship looked weak. I ramble...nicely done...and the title is perfect, Sara

The Situation

Date: 9/23/2023 12:44:00 PM

All these comments yet no one noticed No time is shoulda mentioned.

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2023 7:23:00 AM

Nice rhymes.. I hope they read them.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/23/2023 5:48:00 AM

How heartfelt and thoughtful is this, real questions that would receive answers with time, time reveals all. True love accepts all shades of one. Enjoyed reading this one

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/22/2023 7:59:00 PM

i hope the one you wrote this for has seen it and answers it... all the questions make me wonder though, if they even know you have all these feelings, perhaps your heart knows the answers already...regardless it's a lovely write!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/22/2023 4:53:00 PM

Things to wonder about, but things you can't know until they happen. Love is when your heart and soul can say the traditional wedding vows and commit to keeping them no matter what life brings your way. There will always be challenges to the will of both lovers. I enjoyed your poetry today, TS. Bes wishes for you and your someone. Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/22/2023 1:27:00 PM

true love never asks too many questions, lovely poem full of hope and strength.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2023 12:33:00 PM

Ahh!! A lot of stipulations on that love affair but the wedding vows makes one promise faithfulness through the thick and thin of life. I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

Very poignant, Situation. As Heidi said - "hopefully the answer is yes!" Blessings.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/22/2023 8:44:00 AM

Very nice. Hopefully, the answer is yes. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/21/2023 11:01:00 PM

real love is above everything, she would care for sure, take care yann

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/21/2023 9:52:00 PM

Hi Situation, I really enjoyed your write on this night. I found it to be sincere and heartfelt. Did she see this? I hope your questions get answered. Thanks for visiting my page-Alexis