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I See Beauty

Brimful words deny a rain Veiling all the layers of strain. On the wings of time wounds fly A rage swallowed with no sigh. One soul, of beauty a sea For each dark, twin light I see. When Self unleashed, strength at reach A wisdom deserved to preach. Brightened beats stage a warm heart Wealth of music, words, fine art. Invincible souls soar high With wonderful worlds ally. For each heart there is a home With every pain joy would foam. Drops of awe in silence purl Sink a void and raise a pearl. Climb mountains and oceans cross A fresh Life you come across. Their very feel the words scratch What is inside they can touch. Lots to see for souls to be In a bid to be, Beauty. December 14th, 2018

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Sara Jolly

Date: 2/14/2021 5:14:00 PM

This is so, so beautiful.. 'On the wings of time wounds fly', what a wonderful image, and I love 'One soul, of beauty a sea'. And 'When Self unleashed, strength at reach'... So much depth and meaningfulness. I love it. :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 2:57:00 AM

How sensitive is your poetic soul! How wonderful is your rewarding response, Sara! So honoured and pleased by your graceful presence! My deepest regards and blessings.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/17/2019 12:10:00 PM

Ethereal imagery this fabulous poem be, Besma. You weave such elegant poetic tapestry. Pure poetry from your golden pen. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/20/2019 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Freddie for your generous appreciation to my humble poetry.. It is my immense pleasure and honour to read your inspired poem! Deeply touched.. Best regards and Blessings.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/17/2019 12:12:00 PM

Btw ... I gave a deserving tribute to you in a poem I posted today. The name of the poem is "Truths of Gold." Hope you can get a chance to read it. Love and peace forever.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/9/2019 7:20:00 AM

A fascinating work of poetic art. You my dear friend will definitely be mentioned for eons to come - yout poetry knows no time or era boundaries, but bounces joyfully, and blessedly between each and every facet or sphere of life. You capture life's every moment! Amazing dear soul sister Besma! Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/12/2019 2:10:00 PM

A wondrous feedback emanating from a beautiful soul who has a genuine flair for artistic beauty! Dearest Jennifer, touching your soul and your very heart with my humble words is my immense pleasure.. I'm deeply humbled by your rewarding and sincere words soul sister. Always a great delight to read both your poetry and comments. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs. Blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/5/2019 5:13:00 AM

Powerful imagery here, "Sink a void and raise a pearl." Beautifully penned.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/6/2019 9:29:00 AM

Your honour my write M. L. Kiser.. thank you so much for your gracious presence and sincere words. God bless you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/25/2018 3:36:00 PM

Your spirit view is the future of poets everywhere Besma. Your soul understanding of beauty is fathomless! Have a most wonderful Christmas and New Year! Blessings, Connie

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/26/2018 9:50:00 AM

So much obliged to you dear Connie for your honourable visit and your praising comment! Too much on my humble soul dearest! I highly value and cherish what you see in me.. I am deeply humbled, touched and honoured.. a great elation to read your feedback. Warmest wishes. God bless you.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/23/2018 7:14:00 AM

You have been blessed with a talent for writing (apart from many others) Besma). Not everyone is capable of seeing beauty, but it can't escape a true poet's eyes! May your pen never run dry...I hope that the new year will bring you inspiration galore!! ~ Warm regards. my friend. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/23/2018 2:53:00 PM

Receiving such a beautiful feedback exceeds the joy and the pleasure derived from writing.. I see beauty in every single word of praise and appreciation.. You do honour my humble work, Paul.. thank you so much. My deepest regards. Happy New Year.. Be blessed always.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/19/2018 2:13:00 PM

besma, you are definitely a highly-spirited soul... only one who can feel the majesty of life, the universe, and man can spill ink in a most uplifting, soulful way... namaste... huggs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/19/2018 4:10:00 PM

Namaskar.. a highly spiritual soul as you are dear nette, you generously fathom the layers of the work of art.. touch the soul.. tickle the heart and come up with the finest and sweetest of feedbacks! You honour me.. deeply humbled and immensely grateful.. Love and hugs.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/18/2018 2:16:00 PM

Beauty certainly is in the eye of the beholder, and your thoughts capture it all. I love the feel of this, the way your words whisper gently along the page. May you always be surrounded by so many inspiring moments. :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/18/2018 5:08:00 PM

Outshining are your words of depth and insight.. sweet is your voice of love.. Your ink, dear Brandy, is genuinely dipped into the wonders of poetry penning a wonderful and elating feedback! You honour and reward my humble poem! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/18/2018 11:05:00 AM

The spiritual beauty of your poem inspires your ardent reader with elating awe, dearest Besma. Your soul knows Beauty and your heart expresses beauty in the wondrous imagery and emotions that grace your exquisite poem. The gifts of beauty are within and without one's being; 'Drops of awe in silence purl Sink a void and raise a pearl.' Your words sing of Love and shine in glorious light. A lovely poem to behold and hold in one's heart, my wonderful friend. A fav! Warmest wishes, love and hugs, my immensely talented friend.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/18/2018 4:56:00 PM

Reading your precious, rewarding and warm feedback I feel deeply honoured, grateful and blessed having an adept poetess, a beautiful soul and a knowledgeable mind my ardent reader! God bless you dear Susan.. do have my warmest wishes. My Love and hugs.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/18/2018 4:54:00 PM

A tremendous beauty we both derive from such strong and refined bond! Reader and Poet! The bond is of the highest level and of the finest quality when my ardent reader is a distinctive and masterful poetess! Touching your heart dearest Susan, challenging your mind, satisfying your very soul are my pleasant endeavour.. a level and a dimension I always aspire to..

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2018 6:41:00 AM

Your use of the English language is excellent, as displayed in this poem... WE all should see beauty, sadly some only see negativity and ugliness... Great poem Besma...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/17/2018 3:53:00 AM

The English language is the language of my soul.. you honour my humble poem with your beautiful and elevating feedback.. thank you so much Silent One.. Stay blessed always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/15/2018 6:36:00 PM

I love this: "Drops of awe in silence purl Sink a void and raise a pearl." This poem is quite pleasant to read; it lulls one into a tranquil state easily; beauty flows from every line. Well penned.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/17/2018 3:41:00 AM

I'm humbled by your exhaustive comment M.L. Kiser.. always a pleasure and honour to have you on my page with such uplifting feedback. Thank you so much.. Best regards.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/15/2018 1:18:00 AM

I see beauty too, your poetry and you.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/17/2018 3:39:00 AM

My pleasure and honour Arthur! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/14/2018 11:07:00 AM

Your poem is a beauty of rhythm and rhymes..I found the flow charming and uplifting. Intertwined with nature and words of wisdom ..you painted lovely imagery. Well done, Besma. Regards.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/14/2018 1:15:00 PM

Beautiful, kind and uplifting are your words dear Vijay.. I am grateful to you for your genuine support for my humble poetry.. I highly value your honouring feedbacks.. Thank you so much. My deepest regards. Stay blessed.