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The stir of a love song whispers across midnight, blending times present- times past, punctuating the softness of a silence belonging to memories locked away, hidden within heartbeats . . . whispering a sudden longing for a time before the time when innocence pirouettes on the moment of passion, and all songs stop.

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Date: 10/6/2021 10:11:00 AM
Lovely! Beautifully written!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 10/9/2021 11:55:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/2/2021 8:49:00 AM
very beautifully written!Have a great day!
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Date: 9/24/2021 12:39:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Chetta. So many wonderful lines. This one grabbed me: "...hidden within heartbeats..." I love that!
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Date: 9/12/2021 5:27:00 PM
This is a FAVE for me, Chetta. Just love the feeling of 'all songs stop.' Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 9/9/2021 11:44:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and feelings, Chetta. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:47:00 PM
Chetta, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your poem ~ _Constance
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/12/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/6/2021 10:57:00 AM
Just love the way this works, Chetta. Superb poesy! ~ Gershon
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/6/2021 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, it was fun to write

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