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Hearts of Hope

The rocket soared beyond earth's hold It left behind our glowing eyes It stabbed the skies with hope so bold Our hearts, our dreams, it will enfold And take them high through crystal skies The rocket soared beyond earth's hold It left behind our glowing eyes for Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Triolet" movie - "October Sky" (last scene)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 11:55:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by my triolet Steven :) really appreciate your comments and I love that Sicilian haha & how he always said "inconceivable!!" haha ;) have you read the novel? it's awesome as well! One of my all-time favorites actually :) enjoy your Sunday :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations Steven on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:50:00 PM
Appreciate your wonderful comments Steven.. poetry is our gift from God to share with each other and all who read..luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:17:00 PM
I liked how you incorporated some imagery in to this very nicely crafted triolet. Congrats for your place in my contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:08:00 AM
Congrats Steven on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. with this wonderful write from an awesome movie.. enjoy your top spot..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:31:00 AM
Very interesting Steven, Haven't seen this movie but your triolet sure intrigued me-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:37:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on my poem~ I never say this movie but I think I should ~ best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:46:00 PM
enjoyed sounds like a winner to me!
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Date: 7/30/2010 2:45:00 PM
very pretty
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Date: 7/30/2010 2:44:00 PM
Great entry for the contest,much enjoyed!Celene!
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