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am I just this fleeting moment a ripple in time's flow shackled to one body must follow when it goes or is there more to 'being' an eternal flame that burns and though my mortal flesh must die the soul within returns most now say we have 'one shot' so live a life that's full and while, in part, I see their point I hate to think that's all with countless years in history's wake and many yet to come my impact on the universe so very close to none I need to feel there's so much more some meaning or some goal a reason why, a wider plan that paints a bigger 'whole' so I'll take the path that makes most sense there's more to life than seems and maybe I'm just passing through ... a ghost in this machine

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Date: 3/17/2024 8:47:00 AM
Lovely write vividly expressed .
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Date: 1/21/2024 8:49:00 PM
This is darn good. It is fascinating. I like the futuristic unpredictability.
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Date: 11/25/2023 5:48:00 PM
This is one of those poems that gets better with each reading. I like the subject and the flow. A fav for me. John
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Marcus Whitnell
Date: 11/26/2023 6:44:00 PM
Thanks John, I really appreciate the read and then taking the time to send me a message. Very best wishes, Marcus.

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