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Fire Works

Fire works! Fire works, The black easel sky, Boom! Whiteness explodes, Into blue star outs, Cinders descend, Trickling, Into nothingness, Burned out,, Spinning Razzles, Dazzle,, Spinning Razzles, Dazzle,, Whiteness Explodes, Whiteness Explodes, Red White, Blue White, Collide! Etching patriotism, Into minds,, “Boom!” Fades into “Bam!”, “Crash”, colors splash, “Oooohsss” echo into “Ahhhhhssss”, Cinders fade to ash Bam, Bam, Boom! Bam, Boom! Boom, BAM, Bam, Hands Clap, Clap, Clap, Into Frenzy!,,, And it Ends. NoelsArt Comments: Based on 4th of July celebration over Baltimore's Inner Harbor. FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Date: 2/26/2019 7:15:00 PM
Gee, I missed this great one..Sorry! You actually re created the experoience of fireworks without sound or. video. You are first rate,great job
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Date: 2/26/2019 7:39:00 PM
Panagiota, Feedback fuels my desire to write more. We're all working together! Thanks Big Boss.

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