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I’m the prince with calloused palms up at dawn with stifled yawns; pulling on boots feeding pigs and herding cows - stuck in mud, it’s raining now and as I plough, I dream of life... not on a farm of white walled castles crowned in gold (like the tales told of old) where beautiful princesses dance and laugh (with roaring fires in their hearths) blowing kisses at princes brave and bold - none of them shivering, miserably cold but dreams are dreams, and so I plough heir to acres; fit and well (and down in the village, there is this girl) I have no castle, but I’ll ask for her hand in time, a son, and new prince of this land

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Date: 1/21/2023 1:21:00 PM
Great imagery and dreams..you’ll get the dream girl and son though father and son have calloused hands. Nice one!
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Marcus Whitnell
Date: 1/23/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I’m really grateful for your review.

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