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Faces, Cheeks, and Eyes

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We carelessly scramble about our lives unsure of our destination. Hope is a condition that gives one confidence. Confidence comes from knowing where you will end up. Knowing is having faith. Faith in our eternal outcome is where peace comes from. Having a relationship with God is to know your eternal outcome. To know Christ is peace.
The air thick, like a sweet sticky syrup Sirens wail, polluting the air with chaos Voices screaming, obscenities, obscure messages All the while little children play, in pothole streets Faces everywhere, stained cheeks and bloodshot eyes. Cries in the light of day, bloody hands wave Freedom, Choices, a single right Lost trash, food piles, scattered along roadways Dirty shoes, dangling over power lines Faces everywhere, stained cheeks and bloodshot eyes. Ever searching, an invisible cape, a quick escape Smells of rotting food, bloated flies People who cant stop licking their lips, twisting their hips, and geeking Car alarms screaming, like a symphony out of tune Faces everywhere, stained cheeks and bloodshot eyes. So hungry, empty stomachs, empty hearts, empty minds Seeking to fill, to satisfy, lapping up milk and honey Praying for rain, to wash the stench, to hide the sin, away… Lost, undone, alone, without love Faces everywhere, stained cheeks and bloodshot eyes. Writings of love, of peace, scatter in the rain and wind. An iota, a seed, a shining light, dimly lit in the night People gather, curious, watching, many hoping A gentle voice speaks living words, of life, a better way Faces everywhere, stained cheeks and bloodshot eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/8/2023 4:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/28/2023 9:05:00 AM
Very profound. Unfortunately, that is the reality we live now. And in other to get better, we need to acknowledge how we truly feel and start turning our frawn upside down.
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Date: 2/12/2022 9:10:00 AM
Beautifully written of a people lost in suffering! There was a glimmer of hope towards the end.
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Date: 2/11/2022 4:36:00 PM
Had I not noted the date I would have thought you were writing of the protest going on at the Canadian borders. But this could be in any city today if we just look. Most interesting write.
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Date: 5/15/2021 11:22:00 AM
A thought provoking write...glad it made it on the homepage for all to read. Congrats.
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Date: 1/30/2016 5:19:00 PM
KAREN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:18:00 PM
Karen, nice to see this poem is still up on the soups home page. SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2015 3:15:00 AM
Karen :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:03:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Karen Van Wyk
Date: 7/3/2012 11:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/13/2012 9:15:00 AM
Karen, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Best wishes to you and everyone around you this Mothers Day, God Bless~PD
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Karen Van Wyk
Date: 5/22/2012 11:20:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 5/11/2012 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Karen. Love, Carol
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Karen Van Wyk
Date: 5/22/2012 11:20:00 PM
Thanks!

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