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Expressing Invisible Scars

My mother burned us all…smoke rose from the ashes that clinged to our beds, to the tables and chairs. No one knew of screams that echoed through the night, of the sleepless nights from lying in wait for what may come. Nothing stoked the flames we burned like unsmoked cigarettes slowly our flames died out. My father sat in silence Ignoring blood soaked pillows, ignoring us, and how we were expressing invisible scars through silence and self harm ignoring his own house engulfed in flames.

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Date: 9/5/2023 1:20:00 PM
Oh good gosh this is heartbreaking poetry, and hopefully fictional
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Date: 5/30/2023 9:46:00 AM
Through your words, you give voice to the profound emotions and invisible scars that often go unnoticed. This poem serves as a testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the power of art as a means of healing and self-expression. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/7/2023 11:09:00 PM
Debbie, I haven't read anything of yours before, but this is quite skilfully done and very touching. We hear of stranger-danger; sometimes it's much closer to home. Elizabeth
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