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EUROVISIONs GOLD-Sleep My Love 1958

Enchants, “Dors, mon amour,” night of romance. Long ago, he crooned, put hearts in a trance. André Claveau, nearing fifty years old, effulgence of French lips, Eurovision’s gold. Some audience, annoyed, at love’s deep sleep - need be left alone, or for love to leap… The words, that poetically churn, nonsense to the incensed, these verses of suspense. Sleep, my love - will she awake or’s love passed? He’s locked his princess in tower of past. The contentment, of love, some find boring - nuances “ever-after” adoring. 1958, Giraud and Delanoë, do stare into the lover’s peace and joy. Sleep is in the hollow of his heart. She is together with him all night, in lee. It is not just in movement, we give praise, for the hope of birdsong clings to dusk’s blaze. “With all the refrains of the night,” heart beats. “The sun is still far from daylight,” its sweets. Poet might interpret eternal love as in moment or forever “above.” Such love is felt so deep and stirred in sleep It’s present in a Frenchman’s tongue. I weep.

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Date: 5/15/2024 1:18:00 AM
Once upon a time, we had a Song Eurovision. Now we have pure lust and trash. I have long stopped watching the program. I still recall Non Ho L'Eta by Giliola Cinquetti and Waterloo by Abba and many more.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2024 5:29:00 AM
I had my eye on a sweet one! A long lasting marriage is to be treasured. How we love to know our loved one is right beside us and well you know, as does my Dad, the grief, and yet the breath of the memories wait for new ones in heaven. God bless.
Date: 5/14/2024 4:33:00 PM
a delightfully creative poem and one that beautifully addresses the contest prompt. I appreciate the historical reference with Giraud and Delanoë. I believe this is a solid contest contender! Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2024 4:46:00 PM
I hope the sponsor enjoys it! Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 5/14/2024 1:36:00 PM
Glad I came back as my comment is missing. I made this a Fav as it is so musically creative, I even recall what I said in the commoent…I felt that it made me feel like getting up and dancing and I can no longer dance. Congratulations on a fantastic, poem.And may be mistaken, but I think there was also a common from Jan in Australia. She was one of the first commentors I even remember what she said, and that’s not here either. Pretty spooky. PangieRomios Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2024 2:47:00 PM
I appreciate you letting me know that comments could be disappearing. We really take our time to say the right thing. Glad you liked this and faved it too! Thanks so much, Pangie!
Date: 5/14/2024 1:02:00 PM
What a voice! How beautiful a poem about it- and him; <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2024 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Glad I looked up Eurovision. I had never heard about it before.
Date: 5/14/2024 10:56:00 AM
Bonjour! Aha, mon ami. I found the beautiful song. I could never be bored of The contentment of love. Translations welcome, thank you for sharing your precious ode to a winning French song! My grandmother was known to say we have French in us! ;)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/14/2024 11:34:00 AM
Very interesting, Iroquois Nation wow! My daughter did the DNA test, on my side it's 58.7% European 4.9% is unknown, she says bruja, I say sasquatch! haha, c'est la vie.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2024 11:15:00 AM
Merci Beaucoup, mon ami! My great great great grandfather, an Iroquois Indian, took a French wife. So I have a little French. Oui! Mais Oui!

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