Endless Road

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Etgen-Baker.

Winding Road in Autumn | Luke Collins Photography Print Store

(Images courtesy of wallpapercave.com)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wisdom is not gift bestowed, but journey all take endless, windy road

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2024 10:34:00 AM

Hi Sara! I really like this senryu and the picture. Truly our pursuit of wisdom does take us on a journey with many twists and turns as we seek what is beyond the next bend in the road. If this is for a contest, best wishes. Blessings for your journey as you seek what is wise, honest and ultimately beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2024 9:50:00 PM

Very true. A lovely last line

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/28/2024 9:38:00 PM

You say so much in a few words the vison it leaves one with is beautiful and peaceful Sara hugs Shadow

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/28/2024 7:02:00 PM

Great senryu, Sara.. poets, writers philosophers …may seek wisdom. My experience is most do not, humans want to be right. Above all else! My question to you..what is wisdom? Pangie My definition is..to know …that you do know! Younger people know it all, ask them. Where does one start to be wise!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/28/2024 6:38:00 PM

I really liked this one. It's wise, it's encouraging too in its own way