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Dragon

Denizen of abyssal labyrinth, legendary ancient Wyrm seeks succour within prodigious sepulchral cavern: her domicile for an ageless lifetime. Ethereal shafts cascade through ceiling's stochastic rifts, piercing tenebrous tomb; vicious viscous scarlet smears juxtapose against shimmering iridescent scales. Aeons past, Faustian pact formed with Man: vow of harmonious co-existence exchanged for fulgurant falchion forged in the heart of dragonflame's conflagration. Sacred covenant shattered this night by myriad ironclad interlopers; ruination's harbinger was strident warrior wielding token of treaty. Last vestiges of cacophonous roar dissipate into the Stygian depths; acrid stench of brimstone clogs the air as remnants of vitriolic pyres linger. Twin gargantuan fibrous wings contract behind enormous muscular torso; fulgurating talons sluggishly sheaved as serpentine tail shudders and falls limp. Priceless metals and prismatic gemstones intersperse with charred and twisted corpses; amongst detritus of mortal conflict, majestic titan finally crumples. Massive lurid yellow orbs exhibit an unfathomable intelligence; succumbing to the inevitable, moribund colossus bows forlorn head. Lifemate butchered by zealous paladin; remains of final clutch just motes on breeze. Burden borne by solitary relict: regal behemoth was last of her kind... ---------------------------------------- (C) John C Michaels, 25th April 2017 Free verse, no meter, no rhymes - as per contest rules. 10 syllables on every line (howmanysyllables.com) For the contest entitled "A Mythical Creature" sponsored by Julia Ward.

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Date: 4/28/2017 3:47:00 AM
I second Andrea! Wowza! Very creative and imaginative, John! An impressive write.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/28/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you for your great comments. I really did put everything I had into this one, so am delighted you enjoyed it. Regards, John.
Date: 4/26/2017 5:52:00 PM
My goodness, what a vocabulary you have, John. MOST descriptive this is. Good luck in Julia's contest. I need desperately to finish this one by tomorrow and I have no clue what to do!!!
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Date: 4/27/2017 2:07:00 AM
Thanks for the great comments, Andrea... I really wanted to do something different (& hopefully a bit special) for this one. Hope your mythical muse is in good form for inspiring you today!! All the best, John.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:56:00 AM
- I like your story John, great written - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/27/2017 2:04:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you for your comments - glad you liked it. Regards, John.
Date: 4/25/2017 6:37:00 PM
You went all out for this contest John! This is such an excellent entry for so many reasons. Passion, and intrigue, inspiration enhanced by intellectual phrasing make this such a brilliant poem! I hope to see it high on the winner's list. ; ) 7
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Date: 4/27/2017 2:02:00 AM
Hi Connie. Thank you for the incredible feedback. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Kind regards, John.
Date: 4/25/2017 6:32:00 PM
Awesome. I love the sounds you paint with your words - this wants to be read out loud. Good luck in the contest.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/27/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thanks very much, Agnes. Strangely enough, I have read it aloud to myself a few times!! Regards, John.
Date: 4/25/2017 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations, John...in my eyes this is already a winning entry! I find it powerfully descriptive...captivating imagery and rich vocabulary. #7+ Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 4/25/2017 4:58:00 PM
Thank you for your amazing comments; this was a definite labour of love, so I'm really pleased you enjoyed it! Regards, John.

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