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Downside Spring

So, sure, the sun shines brightly every morn, And birds will share, with all their brilliant tunes; Amazing colored flowers will adorn What once were gray and blah and lifeless dunes. Admittedly it’s warmer in the day, And cloudless skies can cheer the weary heart, And gentle breezes whisk the blues away As life, once more, begins its own restart. But, as the sun stays longer in the skies The pressure builds to try to get things done. And wives and mothers have their battle-cries To get to cleaning, there’s no time for fun. It’s hard to laze when Spring is on the loose, But Winter will provide its own excuse. 2/17/2023 Written for Spring is Not All poetry contest Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 3/3/2023 3:10:00 AM
"It’s hard to laze when Spring is on the loose, But Winter will provide its own excuse" - beautifully ended lines. Congratulations!
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 3/3/2023 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much. Greatly appreciated. And to you as well.
Date: 2/18/2023 5:53:00 AM
You nailed it. Perfect contest entry and excellent sonnet to boot.
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/18/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much!

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