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Doubled Edge Sword

Swords with edges doubled, strength of steel With one side we can love the other side we can kill Tears of silver running down her face Defeated the last angle held in God's good grace Out of forgiveness, unable to feel The side that loved the other side did kill

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/16/2019 5:27:00 PM

Good write, Michael. Congratulations on your win. Charlie

Michael Craig
Date: 12/16/2019 7:45:00 PM

Thanks Charles.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2019 7:28:00 PM

Michael, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Michael Craig
Date: 12/16/2019 12:00:00 PM

You are so very kind . Thank you

Na Na

Date: 12/15/2019 5:36:00 PM

Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Michael

Michael Craig
Date: 12/16/2019 12:00:00 PM

Thank you so very much.

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2019 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/18/2019 11:29:00 AM

This is spectacular, truly has deep meaning to ponder that is creatively delivered in a few lines. I find it profound and so well wrapped up that I'm impressed. (btw - you saved me on the clock write, I had put the # but forgotten the 4 - thank you so much). So glad to see you didn't stop writing because your pen has much to offer! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Michael Craig
Date: 12/16/2019 12:03:00 PM

sorry I haven't thank you sooner. So nice to hear in this case read your response. - Mike