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Disillusioned Vows

Unfulfilled little promises that my people made to me.. My mother vowed me to buy a heart shaped dollar.. But she didn't My father vowed that he would buy own house.. But he didn't My girl friend told she would teach me to ride bike .. But she didn't My best friend told he would offer me treat.. But he didn't My partner told he would invite me abroad .. But he didn't I too made a promise but it's on tussle.. I promised to be a lifelong friend To one of the girl who's posh trend As our friendship grew high I began to sadly sigh I analysed her personality thorough As I slightly disliked it though Managed to stick and adjust Not letting her aware that am unable to ingest. But still somehow I promised to be her affable friend despite knowing one day she is gonna force me bend. I need to maintain distance mode to prevent from fight explode We all do promises for one or the other reason Once given away your promises Lock it in heart's folder premises It has to be consciously kept Later not distressfully wept Before you make For someone's sake Not knowing if they're fake You need to ponder Then later don't wonder Finally when it is made It should be saved Don't allow it to fade... 30-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Second place in the Contest. Note1: *The promise poetry Contest* Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:22:00 PM
Deepa I love your message. Perhaps we all have wondered in our lives when someone broke our promises but we need to remember to keep the ones we made to someone else. Such a beautiful thought. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 12:42:00 AM
Yes mam your absolutely right.:-) Broken promises hurts the heart. Thankyou for your soulful review.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
Date: 6/6/2020 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/6/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thankyou very much sir. I am glad this was eligible for placement...:-) Thanks for the constant encouragement:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa

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