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St Dunstan-in-the-East

DERELICT BEAUTY Below drape of cotton clouds and sunshine, some red-purple live pendants embrace the tall breathless wall... ________________________________ Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest Name: Three Line Poetry Placed 5th O.E. Guillermo 6:24 pm, March 15, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2015 11:33:00 AM

Hi Olive, :) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:43:00 PM

Nice win, Olive Ole' --Lolly Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:31:00 AM

thanks much Lolly Linda.. :D! hugs!!

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:07:00 PM

OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks much Skat.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2015 1:56:00 PM

yes, I remember this one. Good to see it on the winners' list. Congrats, sweetie.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:29:00 AM

thank you Andrea.. :)! weee! congrats too!

James Fraser

Date: 3/18/2015 1:22:00 PM

Many congratulations Olive on your win with this wonderful Kimo. You've captured the image wonderfully, hugs//James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:28:00 AM

thanks much James.. hugs as much!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/18/2015 1:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Lots Of Love Armand.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thanks much MAurice. :)! lots of love too.. hugs!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/18/2015 1:02:00 PM

I love this picture and even more I love your words. A fav!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:22:00 AM

Thanks much Maurice.. :) I so appreciate making this a fave.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2015 11:16:00 AM

Weeee Congratulations Olive-eloi!! Once again I see your name on the winners' list! Very much deserved! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 7:21:00 AM

Thanks much Paul and I see your name too and on the top, alone!!! :D! weeee! yey!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/18/2015 6:33:00 AM

Congrats Olive! Lovely...You wrote a kimo...and I'm Kim...hehe...I know, I know..I have the attacks of bacillus cornitus today...Hugs! Kim :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 7:52:00 AM

hahaha Kim. hope you be ok soon :) congratz too

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/17/2015 8:41:00 PM

Heavenly image and the lovliest poem. A fav for sure. Congratulations on your win, Olive! Hugs, Kimberly xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thanks much Kimberly.. :)! Congratz too.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2015 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 7:02:00 AM

thanks much Debbie.. :)!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/17/2015 7:12:00 PM

Your wondering thoughts encompass the soul of a poet and bring to life the experience for others to ponder. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Emile.. :) You do that too.. :)! weee!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2015 6:02:00 PM

Divine image and wonderful write many congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Sweet Jan.. :)! weee! hugs bakc.. :)xx!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2015 8:48:00 AM

This is such a derelict beauty, Olive_eloi! Out of ruins beauty emerges; three lines (and a perfect picture) which are truly inspiring. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:32:00 PM

Weee see this contests aren't just for writing.. :) I do learn a lot while writing .. :) trivias.. !!! nice! and I see you finished top like the way I see it the first time I read your entry :)!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/17/2015 12:19:00 PM

Yes, you are right!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 6:13:00 AM

Thanks much Paul.. I appreciate your drop by.. I was doing this I made my lil research and this the one that caught my eye from among on what I've seen.. One picture even is in Malta (correct me if am wrong) that A huge Christ statue is submerged.. hugs back!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2015 6:24:00 PM

this one is really nice, Olive. but I'm gonna bug you again. Use "embrace" to go with pendants, not embraces. I think Debs will lke it better that way. Luv, Andrea

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 6:05:00 AM

Thanks much Andie.. :)! I see my mistake grammatically.. thanks much.. ;) hugs!!

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:37:00 PM

Olive, pure beauty....SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 6:03:00 AM

thanks much Skat.. :)!

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/15/2015 1:24:00 PM

Beautiful kimo... #7... best in the contest Olive... nad

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 6:00:00 AM

Thanks much nad.. :)! I appreciate you drop by.. :)!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 1:14:00 PM

Ahh! I love the thought of these wildflowers being nature's pendants! A perfect poem for Deb's contest. Always wishing you happiness and success. 7 Love, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 10:56:00 AM

thanks much Carokyn .. i appreciate your dropping by.. i loke your too..

James Fraser

Date: 3/15/2015 7:34:00 AM

Once upon a long ago said wall spoke, if it spoke now, what would it tell. Now, nature speaks with her greenery and blooms. Fine Kimo Oliz, hugs aplenty//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 7:46:00 AM

Dino James, derelict is a new word for me.. :) hence, I did lil research on some that are really wow.. :) and this one of the 63 photos I ve seen that is voted historically as a beauty.. :)! the others I view are somewhat scary though.. :) thanks for liking it.. :)! //olive eloisa throwing hug from here.. :D!