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“Oh weary hermit, etch these words in stone ~ God is within, we never walk alone” ~ quote by poet Dear God, give us our joy back; our life’s reached a cul-de-sac, with heart caught in desire’s net, our bankrupt soul’s drowned in debt. Pathways of sin, a dead end, for how can darkness defend soul’s innate bliss, ours to claim, when our head hangs low in shame? All seems lost and yet there’s hope, choosing with love to elope, breaking free from ego’s chain, becoming a child again. In mode embrace and release, at wits end we’re yet at ease for lo behold, love and light, illumines the darkest night. Seduced by love’s healing meth, destiny too holds its breath, carving for us a new path, each day, a holy sabbath. Heart’s devout faith opens doors and as divine grace in-pours, when we walk, the path appears, blissful, joyous, free from fears. 07-February-2023 This or That, Vol 16 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/6/2023 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Seeker:-) I loved it!
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Date: 3/3/2023 1:51:00 PM
Inspirational and totally captivating. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/3/2023 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, dear Linda
Date: 3/3/2023 8:52:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved podium win, US. And thanks for your uplifting comment on my page.
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Date: 3/3/2023 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, SP :)
Date: 2/7/2023 7:50:00 AM
A beautiful and meaningful poem, seeker! Your great imagery shed more beauty on this poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, SP ~ this is praise from Caesar!

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