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Copper's Hawk's Got His Eye On

We've seen the rattlesnakes down by the treacherous creek. Cooper's Hawk's got his eye on salamanders singing in sunshine down by the treacherous creek. Golden finches flailing about, salamanders singing in sunshine gathering at the culvert ... golden finches flailing about. Ominous gray rain clouds hover gathering at the culvert. Now that it's raining-- ominous gray clouds hover like a mighty, hungry Osprey. Now that it's raining leaves will be floating through and like a mighty, hungry Osprey Cooper's Hawk's got his eye on. Leaves will be floating through and we've seen the rattlesnakes.

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Date: 5/6/2024 7:32:00 AM
I enjoy this pantoum style for this poem. Just like nature itself, the poem is born in the first stanza, and is reborn in the last. I always enjoy the stories of countryside wildlife. Thank you.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/6/2024 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda. I'm so glad you appreciated this poem. Carol Louise
Date: 5/6/2024 6:04:00 AM
Nice poem! Enjoyed it! Nicely written! Very descriptive of nature and how it unfolds! If you get a chance to read my poems also.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/6/2024 7:13:00 PM
Hi Lynn. Thanks for the nice comment. I have read your recent well-written poem LIFE's CONFUSING MESSAGES. Well done. Carol Louise
Date: 5/6/2024 12:30:00 AM
A beautiful poem, showing nature at its best.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/6/2024 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Zyrool!
Date: 5/3/2024 6:56:00 PM
This is a very intriguing piece I adored reading your awesome work .
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/5/2024 11:15:00 PM
Thanks, Yolanda!
Date: 4/29/2024 5:21:00 AM
Lovely, Carol! Filled with vivid images! Hugs ~ Kim
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/29/2024 4:05:00 PM
Thanks, Kim!

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