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Chocolate Cake

I admit, it was me who ate that whole chocolate cake I’m not very proud, please give me a break I was possessed by the devil or some malevolent force It was as if some entity stood over me, I felt so coerced Even from the oven I heard it calling my name My mind was already made up, I wasn’t going to play that game. Smelling so delicious my lips had began smacking Sneaking trips to the kitchen I was definitely tracking. Then it was all finished to my sheer delight A fork in the middle to make sure it baked right. I couldn’t stop munching I was out of control I ate it right out the pan; Why waste a bowl? Piece by piece I sliced until it was through It was so yummy; What else was I supposed to do? I know you were thinking, share it or cut a piece for another time. Yeah, it’s all gone so I won’t even bother with this rhyme.

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Date: 11/16/2022 1:20:00 PM
Ah, the complete self addiction to chocolate. A fine argument for gluttony. What a grand way to go! Chocolate cake lovers make poetry from their obsession. Love it! Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 1/10/2022 2:16:00 AM
A girl after my own heart! flourless choc-cake is my kryptonite, good one Nora, love, James
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Date: 3/9/2021 6:18:00 PM
This is too relatable, Nora. I too find chocolate cake irresistible (I occasionally imagine the Matilda kind) haha. What a fun and creative piece. Enjoyed reading. Thanks again for checking out my page. I learn a lot from poets like you. Cheers - Ansar :)
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Date: 2/14/2021 6:29:00 AM
I too would succumb to the dastardly Chocolate Cake. This is a fun and delicious write. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/10/2021 12:11:00 PM
So much for Devil's food! German chocolate next time! Aloha! Rico
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Nora Gibson
Date: 2/10/2021 5:09:00 PM
unfortunately this is true...Aloha to the fat girl ..thanks

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