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By the Water's Edge

A ruby-red sun slowly starts to sink; its sanguine sunbeams coloring clouds pink. And as a molten moon mirrors Sole's face, its gilded beams begin to fall in place. And as dusk's darkness drowsily descends, a star-studded sky suddenly transcends. And, wave wrinkled waters washing ashore form frothy foam tops, the seagulls adore. The beach sands are orange with crawling crab that tides, tethered to the moon, cannot grab. And a fog fashioned from droplets of mist fosters faint feelings of just being kissed. Now, night navigates through the tides of day, inking indelible shadows that stay. And as ebony engulfs everything, charcoal clouds corral the moon in a ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/15/2024 12:25:00 AM
smooth, beautiful, and glamorous. really well written. I like your style. Much Blessings - Hiba <3
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/15/2024 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Hiba; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Date: 3/21/2020 11:08:00 PM
Really stunning Emile. Beautifully composed with masterful inclusion of so many poetic elements. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/22/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2019 3:04:00 PM
Emile, this beautiful poem is so outstanding I wish I could give it more than just a fave! I absolutely love the beauty, the rhyme, imagery, and the feeling this poem gave me. Bravo! It is so deserving of First Place. Please share it with PFT. xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, you honor me my friend, I will share it with PFT , Emile.
Date: 3/26/2019 12:53:00 AM
Very nice.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/26/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Aurore, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2019 2:19:00 PM
Such stunning imagery is expressed with your superb poetic pen, Emile! This is a beauty! Best of luck in the contest! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/25/2019 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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