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Like the soothing roar of the ocean, I can feel it As it skips gently over stones unturn, I yearn to be it It tickles my nose, ruffles my clothes, and wonders where I've been I realize in all this running around, I've forgotten my good friend A friend who held my hand when we were little kids As we ran and hid from all the silly things we did Who kissed me on the forehead and dried my tears When the deepest pain only confirmed my fears After all these years it still brings me to my knees That I can listen to the ocean and her breeze

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Date: 11/21/2023 9:36:00 AM
Beautifully written piece, Tahj. I can feel the ocean breeze and relate to the disconnect from an old friend.
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Tahj Jones
Date: 11/22/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/21/2023 7:11:00 AM
Your poem made me feel the cool breeze of the ocean. I hope you stayed in contact with your good friends.
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Date: 11/22/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 11/21/2023 5:44:00 AM
Great friend here, and a very good read. Thank you, Tahj.
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Tahj Jones
Date: 11/22/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thank you for reading it!
Date: 10/29/2023 5:28:00 PM
Love the photo son! You should watermark it.
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Tahj Jones
Date: 10/30/2023 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, it is.
Date: 10/29/2023 3:31:00 PM
A good poem. Well done.
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Tahj Jones
Date: 10/30/2023 3:49:00 PM
Thank you

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