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Bite Size Poem Contest--Winter's Breath

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(“Winter’s Breath,” Image courtesy of fineartamerica.com)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ winter’s breath dances on the air, a silent serenade of frost and bare trees it whispers tales of long nights and solitude of silent snowflakes and crystalline dreams winter’s breath, cold and pure, a quiet song in the heart of February’s soul

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/20/2024 4:04:00 AM

A lively, picturesque write, warmest congratulations on your top placement, Sara, beautifully penned.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 4:09:00 AM

thank you, 'Unseeking,' for your kind, gracious comments and congratulatory words. I'm delighted. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/18/2024 9:06:00 AM

Such a wonderful read! Congratulations on the win!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:49:00 PM

thank you for visiting, for your comments, and for the congratulatory words. Color me grateful, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 3/17/2024 6:11:00 AM

What a lovely personification of winter you've penned for our pleasure, Sara. Winter's breath certainly can be harsh, but in its visits, there is also great beauty... breathtaking if you'll pardon the pun. I see congratulations are in order for your top podium placement.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:49:00 PM

thank you, Lin, for your kind comments and for your congratulatory words. I am delighted with my placement, for I do love the shorter forms. Wishing you a pleasant Louisiana evening, hugs Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/16/2024 10:43:00 AM

Dear sara, im happy to see your receive first place in this bite size contest as you are one of those that weave magic in brevity leaving us all captivated: about time your poems get recognised. Congratulations! A very well deserved win this is. I just love this! Pleasure always reading your work

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:47:00 PM

thank you, Ink, for visiting and for taking delight in my win. I agree...the short forms have become my forte so I was glad to see this contest. I'm grateful for the win as well. Thank you for your encouragement. Wishing you a wonderful evening, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 3/16/2024 12:07:00 AM

Congratulations dear Sara on your win!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 4:27:00 AM

thank you, Karen! I'm delighted and grateful for my placement. Wishing you a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/11/2024 10:36:00 AM

Breathlessness in the winter's breeze, we want more of the enchanting words, please. Your poetry today set my mind at easy, I wish these feelings would never cease. Gentle and pleasant poetry, my dear friend. Hugs and such, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/11/2024 3:49:00 PM

oh, you're comments touched my heart...glad my words set your mind at ease....I want that for you...so I'm glad it worked out :-) hugs & such back at you.

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2024 9:56:00 AM

You expressed winter so poetically..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/10/2024 4:11:00 PM

ahhh, thank you :-)

Paige Hind

Date: 2/9/2024 5:40:00 PM

Lovely work! You captured how winter 'breathes' so well. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/10/2024 4:11:00 PM

thanks, Paige...appreciate your visit and comments, hugs, Sara