Get Your Premium Membership

Beating Love

Blossoming In the inner depths Like a flower warm touching emotions Dressed in dark Glowing in the embers A loving devotion Sparking in dreams Not being able To do without In the clouds A gentle sigh Within feelings At one with the silver lining Shines beauty Lifting the curtains Sparkling emotions A dazzling jewel Smiling happiness Raising the spirit To the highest A whisper falls upon the breath The soul sings out Fluttering In it's breeze Gives wings Love you take The very breath away The heart flies In the spirit of you Without wings Floating heartbeats Banging on the drums Within emotions For you my dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/11/2013 9:56:00 PM
A girls dream a man who knows emotion and expresses so well good job
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 1:04:00 PM
thank you madelin for the beautiful dream comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/11/2013 2:37:00 PM
"Blossoming in the inner depths like a flower warm touching emotions dressed in dark"... I feel like that verse describes me perfectly!... I loved reading this wonderful poem. I am adding it to my favorites!...Thank you for the beautiful comments, as always!
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 3:12:00 PM
THE BEAUTY IS IN THE COMMENT I THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/11/2013 7:28:00 AM
I was going to pick some of my favourite verses here..but I can`t cause i love them.all..Beautiful the soul which flutters without wings.It feels like magic
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 9:23:00 AM
THE MAGIC IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT FLUTTERING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BUTTERFLY I THANK YOU DEARLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Book: Shattered Sighs