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baby elephants - a letter to my mother

baby elephants stay with their mothers their whole lives they follow them for miles, hiding in the maternal shade of large, floppy ears, perfect for listening to their cries. so why, mom, did you leave your baby, even after hearing my cries. you came back, left again, came back,. such a confusing cycle for such a young elephant. baby elephants learn from their mothers. how to use their trunks, how to climb out of ditches across the lands, so why, mom, did you leave me in that ditch alone. you came back for me, you did, but not before i learned to climb out myself. baby elephants stay in their herds for life, with their mothers, they walk as long as their legs will take them, the herd does not leave them behind, their mothers make sure of that. so why, mom, did you let me walk alone, no one to teach me, that walking alone for so long, takes such a grand toll on my legs. baby elephants love their mothers, and their mothers would do anything, anything at all, for their babies. protect them, feed them, watch them sleep. so why, mom, did you do everything but love me.

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Date: 5/16/2024 4:51:00 PM
Wow, the ending is not what I expected. Interesting twist bringing it back to the human experience of the narrator.
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Oliver Chu
Date: 5/18/2024 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment, I'm a big fan of your work!
Date: 5/5/2024 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Oliver Chu
Date: 5/6/2024 7:47:00 AM
Thank you!! I appreciate your words :)

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