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Avalanche of a Heart

(Avalanche of Heart's Desire) Walked in this valley for such a long time in contentment with silent resignation. The mountainous life slopes ever in view; of man’s visuals, I held marked reservations. Plain of face, with life giving aged lines, and now carrying an extra few pounds. Man’s lofty ideas of a perfect woman riding high while I strolled near the ground. Then came a man sliding down a slope His words enticing as an aurora sky. The avalanche of my heart’s desire seeing beauty where it once grew shy. Taking my hand, with a show of strength, He led me to a wondrous plateau. He showed me sights so long unseen that I forgot the lonely meadow below. © All Rights Reserved by the Author 2/16/16 Fiction--- pure fiction lol …but a girl can dream in poetry… sighhhhh

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Date: 4/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:51:00 PM
Debra, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:26:00 PM
Debra , your descriptive dream are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:57:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/17/2015 3:14:00 PM
You can call it poetry or you can call it journaling. Either way, if you can't put your feelings down on paper. What good is it. I champion your heart in every write. Peace. :)
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:36:00 PM
A beautiful write - hold on to your dreams Debra:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:37:00 AM
- A beautiful way to describe life (which goes too quickly) Debra !!! - What is life without dreams ........... in dreams are almost everything perfect :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Debra! I love the imagery and how you used the avalanche and aurora in your wonderfully romantic poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/16/2015 9:33:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra... guess I should get over to the page to enter lol I almost forgot .. lol

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