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Autumn

My heart cannot live without you, But my mind says something different. Like the leaves during fall, Each one falling as if they’re motioning “no.” Without you, I don’t know where to go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/7/2024 9:52:00 AM
Dear Jonathan, your tender embrace of melancholy is simply beautiful. Such a soulful piece where one feels lost like an untethered autumn leaf where the winds of fate sweep in opposing directions. Your poignant poem is wonderfully evocative. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jonathan Lehman
Date: 5/7/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much! This was one of the first poems I wrote around a year ago.

Book: Shattered Sighs