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Angelic Assist

*** light within the raging storm another grain at cascade's end a grasp when stumbling press when crumbling no needle, thread, but still the mend a drop when drought has sunk all hope and happiness has turned away a bucket for tears a reprieve from fears a home to return to when led astray ***

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/18/2023 11:32:00 AM

A lovely write. I have heard each tear is counted. It will go against the person who caused it. Guess in heaven we will find out. Have a wonderful/blessed day...................

Hello There
Date: 1/20/2023 10:21:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Have a wonderful day : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2019 5:18:00 PM

the ending ties this up all very well. A home to return to when led astray. Very nicely written poem.

Hello There
Date: 9/26/2019 6:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/26/2019 7:46:00 AM

We get that assistance whether we know it or not...sometimes I notice...there are many signs...lovely verse HT...^WW^ :o)

Hello There
Date: 9/26/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thank you, ^WW^. I never used to know this, but then there came to be no other explanation... Thank you ~

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2019 4:37:00 PM

we all need mending and that ray of hope to help us in the darker times...sometimes i think the tears need a pool or something to catch them though... great poem! hugs :)

Hello There
Date: 9/25/2019 5:08:00 PM

I had a dream once, but never wrote about it... about tears being caught, in a bottle of sorts. Funny you chose those words... Thank you, Sandra (hugs)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2019 8:17:00 AM

I liked the angelic tone in your poem and in these verses, HT:no needle, thread, but still the mend a drop when drought has sunk all hope ...a bucket for tears a reprieve from fears.

Hello There
Date: 9/25/2019 10:18:00 AM

:) Thank you, Vijay ~ thank you for sharing this with me <3