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A Pyrrhic Triumph

Her eyes lightened the darkness of my hopelessness, something about its softness pulsated. Oh, what a prize, my dear be mine. I stared at her gently moving pupils hopeful, to catch her gracious, precious attention. But as our eyes locked, her consort arrived, which solidified that she won't ever be mine. Will there ever be a time when, I can see such beauty again? Short-lived dreams and, pyrrhic triumphs. - Ansar 28/02/21

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Date: 4/14/2021 9:27:00 PM
Ah, a pyrrhic victory, certainly -- but at least a 'victory' in those 'eyes-locked' moments... Never fear. Love comes when least expected. Cheers, Gershon
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Ansar Mohammed
Date: 4/16/2021 7:16:00 PM
You're spot on with the victory, Gershon. Many thanks for your comments. :)
Date: 4/10/2021 2:30:00 PM
Great penned poem, a lot of heart touching imagery, good luck and best regards
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Date: 4/10/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you for kind comment, Lasaad. It's much appreciated. I'm quite a fan of your work as well. Stay safe on your end :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:41:00 PM
Oh my! this has happened to so many ! Good poem.
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Date: 4/7/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Virginia. It is much appreciated. Stay safe :)
Date: 4/5/2021 10:44:00 AM
I loved reading this, twice. Great work and a new word for me! Thank you Ansar.
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Date: 4/7/2021 9:24:00 AM
Thank you for reading and for your kind words, Ken. It is much appreciated. Stay safe. :)
Date: 4/4/2021 4:38:00 PM
Truly beautiful.
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Date: 4/7/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Anna. It is much appreciated. Stay safe on your end. :)
Date: 3/10/2021 5:28:00 AM
Also Welcome to the soup, I have a feeling you will fit in very well. Thanks for your visit and thoughts and for introducing yourself. ;0)
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Date: 3/10/2021 5:27:00 AM
One who has a poetic heart will always be in the vicinity of beauty. An exceptional first poem dear poet.
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Date: 4/16/2021 7:35:00 PM
You are too kind, Richard. Thank you. Cheers! :)
Date: 3/3/2021 11:45:00 AM
A lovely though sad poem Ansar, a good contender for the contest ~ Belle
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and encouraging words, Belle. It's truly appreciated. Stay safe on your end. - Ansar :)

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