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63vw Bug Domed Home

63VW Bug Domed Home $300 Empty Wallet, Waved in Greeting Others "Bugged", DIY Toolin' Schoolin', Leakin' Carb Fixit, Installed & Tighten', Fired Her Up & Look It, Engine Lit & Smokin', Act Fast, Shut Down Fit, Back to Wrenchin', Leakin' Porous Gasket, Déjà Vous Installin', Finally Fuelin', No Casket, Then Brakes Not Willin', Free Fall Down Hill Drastic, Frantically Emergency Leverin', Arrived at Bottom Intact, Sigh of Relief Breathin', Heat from Engine Extract, Smelled of Gasolin', Either Sweatin' or Shiverin' Fact, What Next? Wheel Fallin'!, Balancing Acrobat Act, Shoulder Oasis Seekin', Rewheel Lug Tightin' Enact, Pulled Into Shell Station, One Lookover & Mechanic, Hung Sign "Dangerous Caution", "Too Hazardous, Inevitable Panic", "Stay Off Road, Public Hazard if Run", Starvin' Student, So "What the Heck?", Drove Bug 3 More Years, An Eon!, Careful for the Sake of Pilotin' a Wreck. Now Can Laugh, I & Others Were Spared Extinction! Next a Mercedes Diesel 200D Precision but Air Dreck, Follies of Youth: Survived & Shunned, Relieved Everyone!

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Date: 9/9/2019 8:29:00 AM
Hehe...to this girl this poem sounds like what would be my browsing history if I was attempting to fix my car. LOL Very funny conceptual poem and a good hard read. I laughed. ( in a good way )Thank you for sharing :-)
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Date: 9/8/2019 11:47:00 AM
Ha! Excellent write. I had a V.W. once as a kid, so I can really relate. Well done!
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Date: 6/12/2019 10:42:00 PM
This is hilarious, Chaim! I can just picture the breakdowns in every line you penned. :) gw
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