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09.05.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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the sweet scented spring drinking the sun's ruby rays - all the birds are rapt

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/27/2024 6:07:00 PM

Anne-Lise...not only the birds, but me too! You are a great celebrator of the beautiful.

Warren Doll

Date: 5/18/2024 8:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise, beautiful Haik; Great imagery. Hugs~ Warren

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2024 9:47:00 AM

What a lovely Haiku write for "May" with a pretty flower picture. Have A Great Day Writing Away........

Len Gasun

Date: 5/14/2024 8:18:00 PM

So gorgeous my dearest poet friend Anne Lise. You wrote this haiku excellently with ease. Thank you so much for gracing my day with this gem. God bless you always and have a wonderful day always! Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/13/2024 10:35:00 PM

The birds and the bees. and the flowers and the trees are all impatient for summer and are now budding to exhibit their glorious.summer colors. Superb poem my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Ink Empress

Date: 5/10/2024 1:14:00 AM

Dear anne lise, i love this! You write haiku so well and in such a soft and artistic manner. I can smell spring through your words and see suns ruby rays too. How picturesque! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you always light.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/9/2024 5:08:00 PM

I like the haiku. The inclusion of the birds was an added plume to a poem of spring.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/9/2024 3:39:00 PM

Very nice read! Birds feel great rapture! Delightful haiku. Best regards, hugs ~ AA

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/9/2024 3:15:00 PM

exquisite Haiku--flowing and soft lines. I liked 'sun's ruby rays'--perfect description. You have a way with Haikus. I enjoy reading yours. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/9/2024 2:02:00 PM

very soft and lovely, anne-lise!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2024 10:30:00 AM

Love this! sweet scented…sun’s ruby rays! xx Kim

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/9/2024 10:15:00 AM

I really appreciated the elegance of your poetry, Anne-Lise, as well as the wonderful photograph you took to celebrate the majesty of spring.

Jay Narain

Date: 5/9/2024 9:20:00 AM

Nice one.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/9/2024 8:45:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, your poem is pure magic! The imagery is stunning ("ruby rays," "rapt birds") and the language so evocative (sweet scent). It captures the joy of spring perfectly. Makes me want to breathe it all in! - Blessings, Daniel